Friday, October 24, 2014

My Name Poem. I LOVE CAKE

Alex is my name. Given to me by my parents. Sometimes I’ll always ask them why give me such a name? My name described in many ways but like a train going into a tunnel this question always comes into my brain. All I know is that my name is Alex I’m from Dallas I have many different talents but a very great challenge to get over my lack of ballast. Defender and helper of mankind is a very jumping description in my opinion. I see my name a very rough object but soft to the touch. Such an object never seen before and such a mystery to the people that have seen it before.  Full of color and shaped just like a toy this thing can bring some funny jokes and lots of joy. This is how it comes to mind. A very unusual but strong name given to me by my own two loving parents. I enjoy having the name. What is there really to hate? But oh my gosh look I just found some cake!!

15 comments:

  1. I really liked your poem and it was really funny.

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  2. This was very entertaining and I really liked the flow of it and the end was funny

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  3. Dramatic buildup... boost of mood... BOOM CAKE

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  4. I like how you made it rhyme in prose form

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  5. raTHER INDIFFERENT ABOUT IT

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  6. I like how the ending of your poem is. It was very humorous.

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  7. I don't think it's the worst prose in history. The line about the cake sounds like something you would say, too. :)

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  8. Your poem was entertaining I liked it

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  9. Your ending was so funny. Cake is life

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  10. That was awesome, I love everything you write. I think the rhythm was really interesting

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  11. Your poem was funny and well put together.

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